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Abiquiu by ~DeZia:iconDeZia:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Ballad


She Stood before the Storm
Rivers washed and Fallwind torn
She Stood before the Sword
A-lost in thought by Lostman's Word

"Arco-Iris"or so it said
It's calm Voice echoed, Drained the Dread...
Fear so dripped upon the floor
Liquid green to pools did store
Emotion 'round Its Hilt took Form
Like tears the Soul of Worlds did Mourn
"Deeper still." so said the Sword.

Deeper went the Lost One's Mind
'Till Twin and Fixed in Web did find
Soul jewels Lauquered smooth and fine
Laquers melt and fell away
Leaked to Sword in Windy Sway...
©2007-2009 ~DeZia
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Author's Comments

I had a swirl of rainbow liquid in my mind and had to write it out in the form of a poem... To be continued |D

I think only my sister knows the real importance of the Sword "Arco Iris"... seems like it's coming back to me.

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~WoodandMetal Dec 12, 2007, 3:32:02 PM
Incredible poem XD

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~RedLioness Dec 12, 2007, 4:27:52 PM
'Arco Iris'? Isn't that cookie?

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I have loved the stars too fondly to be frightened by the night. -Sarah Williams

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~DeZia Dec 12, 2007, 4:30:03 PM
xD It may be a brand, I'm not sure. It's rainbow in Spanish, I've always loved how the word sounds.

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[[Think of A l l the Things We Did B E F O R E

Write them in a l e t t e r that says

"REBoRN"]]
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~RedLioness Dec 12, 2007, 4:38:33 PM
Yeah, it's a Mexican cookie! Shortbread squares with different colored marshmallows and coconut sprinkles on top.

Mmmmm, arcoiris . . . .

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I have loved the stars too fondly to be frightened by the night. -Sarah Williams

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If you think Silvarbelle should be brought back to DA, paste this into your signature!!!!
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~DeZia Dec 12, 2007, 5:09:42 PM
Goodness. I'd hate to mistake a LEGENDARY SWORD for a COOKIE.

Someone would pull something out of a box and either be pleasantly surprised or sorely disappointed D:

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[[Think of A l l the Things We Did B E F O R E

Write them in a l e t t e r that says

"REBoRN"]]
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~RedLioness Dec 12, 2007, 6:34:25 PM
LOL, sorry, I just go off on my little tangents. XP

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I have loved the stars too fondly to be frightened by the night. -Sarah Williams

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If you think Silvarbelle should be brought back to DA, paste this into your signature!!!!
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~DeZia Dec 12, 2007, 6:35:19 PM
xD its okay, the image was hilarious. And now I crave these little rainbow cookies D:

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[[Think of A l l the Things We Did B E F O R E

Write them in a l e t t e r that says

"REBoRN"]]
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~o0o0o0o0o Dec 15, 2007, 7:48:38 PM
"swirl of rainbow liquid" sounds cool.

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~DeZia Dec 15, 2007, 8:18:38 PM
It looks cool too O.O Ever mixed several colors of paint in a bucket? Put it under a blacklight/full sunlight... That's what it looked like in my head.

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[[Think of A l l the Things We Did B E F O R E

Write them in a l e t t e r that says

"REBoRN"]]
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