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Deconstruction Decree by ~DeZia:iconDeZia:



Watching them
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              G r a f i t t i  in  >Motion>

W i t h  Closeness  C r e a t i n g  B o n d s  o f  O x y t o c i n

Concrete D o l p h i n s in the Unwavering Waves

In Pods in the Conclaves, and through The Veiling Drapes

Gauze between The                Here
                  and the                               Next


                 Awaiting the Gates and Baring their Necks


                       Neverwhere
             is Closer than Ever There
   And Ever There in The Everywhere:
                The  I N D E F I N I T E  TRUTH

       Reality’s Last Proof

         To Which they Witness with Indiscretion
        Learning by Lines and the City’s Injection
                       The Final Lesson
       They  L
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                  And  >R>a>n>
                              on Mortal Legs 'Round Rings
And Flew >F>a>s>t>

       on  P l e x i g l a s s  W i n g s  to a Concrete Sea

Under the /Backlit/Blacklight/ of a C o n c r e t e  S u n

Whereupon was Grafittied the Final Decree:


Those Who Step into the Bounds of This City.
                 
                   Know Thyself and

                                  Be Free
©2008-2009 ~DeZia
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Written and typog'd in about half an hour.

WHY CAN I NOT HAVE URBAN/EXPERIMENTALAS A GENRE? Awwell. It's urban, another piece of the Neonomicon, meant to be a religious text in an Urban Fantasy setting.

Oxytocin? Wozzat? it's the chemical that creates feelings of trust among people. It's very similar to Oxycontin yess a chemical that numbs the body, a painkiller as well as a newer "joyride" drug. Gonna be contrasting those two a lot in the Neonomicon.

And where is the Neonomicon going to be used...?

tsuDAKI of course <: I needed a purely modern religion based on cities, music, etc, and I figured, why not use what I've already built?

So, Neonics are one of three religious groups in the True Sleepless City, a group of technopagans, and they are kinda like kinda like Cyberpunks, Hippies and Buddhists had babies in a bizarre breeding program worthy of the matrix.

Because that is HIGHLY unlikely in the real world.
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I really like the, 'Neverwhere is Closer than Ever There,' bit quite a lot. D8 The sound it makes together is just so rhythmical, it needs to be sung, almost. And I adoooore the >R>a>n motions XDD That. Is just incredible. Like it's motioning reader to follow along with the running. Very visual, and a beautiful overall composition of the falling of the letters and such.

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Through the Gates of Hell...
[. . . W e K n o w Y o u .]
I had to say some of it out loud to get the perfect words to fit together x3

And for the motions, I kept on seeing that JUST italics wasn't going to get the movement I needed >: But they keyboard was my friend.

But I would totally love to make this as a song >x Like, Pendulum style. OOOOH HOW I WISH I HAD A KEYBOARD FOR MY GARAGE BAND PROGRAM D|

saaankyuuu~

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If I gave it to Dad, he could music it for you, if I asked really nicely.

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. take my hand,
we'll run forever till it ends .
ghfsdagfd are you serious D8

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Seriously serious. :>

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. take my hand,
we'll run forever till it ends .
8D THAT WOULD BE FREAKING AWESOME.

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KAY. I WILL ASK HIM.

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. take my hand,
we'll run forever till it ends .
great text... i love the rhythm and flow of it. did you know that now they're starting to use oxytocin as a treatment for autism?

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don't hate....tolerate!
clubs: ~youthphotographers =RawEm0tion *PhotographersClub*100ThemesChallenge

how can god truly hate true love...?
I knew oxytocin was related to autism <: It's good news that it's being used for treatment!

And thanks much for the kind comment~

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